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Improve writing by considering feedback from adults, peers, and/or online editing tools, revising to improve clarity, structure, and style.
Standard #: ELA.11.C.1.5
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Subject Area: English Language Arts (B.E.S.T.)
Grade: 11
Strand: Communication
Standard: Communicating Through Writing
Date Adopted or Revised: 08/20
Status: State Board Approved
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  • ELA.11.C.1.AP.5 # Improve writing when given feedback from an adult, a peer and/or an online editing tool, revising to improve clarity, structure and style.
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Lesson Plans
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  • Resumes Part 3: Writing My Resume #

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  • Resumes Part 2: Writing a Resume's Experience Section #

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Original Student Tutorial
  • Blasting Off with Active and Passive Voice # Learn to distinguish between passive and active voice and how to revise sentences by changing them from passive voice to active voice in this interactive Space Race-themed tutorial.
Original Student Tutorials for Language Arts - Grades 6-12
  • Blasting Off with Active and Passive Voice # Learn to distinguish between passive and active voice and how to revise sentences by changing them from passive voice to active voice in this interactive Space Race-themed tutorial.
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