Standard 3 : Revising (Archived)



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The student will revise and refine the draft for clarity and effectiveness.

General Information

Number: LA.7.3.3
Title: Revising
Type: Standard
Subject: X-Reading/Language Arts (former standards - 2008) - Archived
Grade: 7
Strand: Writing Process

Related Benchmarks

This cluster includes the following benchmarks
Code Description
LA.7.3.3.1: The student will revise by evaluating the draft for development of ideas and content, logical organization, voice, point of view, word choice, and sentence variation;
LA.7.3.3.2: The student will revise by creating clarity and logic by rearranging words, sentences, and paragraphs and developing relationships among ideas;
LA.7.3.3.3: The student will revise by creating precision and interest by using a variety of sentence structures (including the use of participles and participial phrases at the beginning and end of sentences), creative language devices, and modifying word choices using resources and reference materials (e.g., dictionary, thesaurus); and
LA.7.3.3.4: The student will revise by applying appropriate tools or strategies to evaluate and refine the draft (e.g., peer review, checklists, rubrics).


Related Access Points

This cluster includes the following access points.

Independent

Access Point Number Access Point Title
LA.7.3.3.In.a: Review for clarity of content, focus, organization, and word choice and use of simple and compound sentences to express ideas.
LA.7.3.3.In.b: Improve connections between main ideas and details and modifying details to communicate the purpose.
LA.7.3.3.In.c: Change words and sentences to clarify the meaning or add interest using resources and reference materials to select more precise vocabulary.
LA.7.3.3.In.d: Use tools and strategies (e.g. checklists, rubrics, teacher or peer review) to improve the writing.

Supported

Access Point Number Access Point Title
LA.7.3.3.Su.a: Review the draft for clarity of content and organization and use of complete sentences to express ideas.
LA.7.3.3.Su.b: Clarify connections between main idea and details with prompting.
LA.7.3.3.Su.c: Add descriptive words or details.
LA.7.3.3.Su.d: Use tools, strategies, and resources to improve the draft (e.g. teacher or peer review, dictionary).

Participatory

Access Point Number Access Point Title
LA.7.3.3.Pa.a: Adjust information communicated about persons and objects when necessary by selecting different pictures, symbols, or words.